most precious snowdrop cinnamon bun
Posts: 54
Preferred Name: Chika
Pronouns: she/her
Character Profile: Knight-Prince
Character Name: Polydeuces Chariot
Main Account: Teddy
Status: Active
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Post by Polydeuces on Jul 31, 2015 6:10:05 GMT -5
Hey look I got a second to eval tonight too :D (shut up 6AM is still night I haven't slept yet HAHAHA;;;)
Polydeuces + RP link w/ Zeke!
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hufflefucker with pride
Posts: 4
Preferred Name: Lills
Pronouns: She/her
Character Name: Rachael
Main Account: Rachael
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Post by Rachael on Aug 1, 2015 18:37:05 GMT -5
PolydeucesHi Chika! Your rps are good, but I'm going to need you to clarify Poly's backstory a little more. It tells me a bit more about Pen than it does Poly, and what happened to her is a little unclear. Was she killed by Vigilantes? Or did the Secret Police get her for telling him about her job? If it's the latter, she most likely wouldn't be eliminated just for that, especially considering that he's in the Upper Class. So if you could clarify what happened there that would be awesome, thank you!
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most precious snowdrop cinnamon bun
Posts: 54
Preferred Name: Chika
Pronouns: she/her
Character Profile: Knight-Prince
Character Name: Polydeuces Chariot
Main Account: Teddy
Status: Active
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Post by Polydeuces on Aug 1, 2015 18:54:51 GMT -5
RachaelMade some edits & additions, and also shot you a PM ;v;7 If the tweaks still aren't enough just let me know /o/
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hufflefucker with pride
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Preferred Name: Lills
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Character Name: Rachael
Main Account: Rachael
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Post by Rachael on Aug 1, 2015 19:08:37 GMT -5
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