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Posts: 38
Preferred Name: Mist
Pronouns: She/Her
Character Profile: Character Hub
Character Name: Riley
Main Account: this one
Status: Busy w/ Life
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Post by Riley on Aug 8, 2015 21:45:46 GMT -5
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Preferred Name: Lills
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Character Name: Rachael
Main Account: Rachael
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Post by Rachael on Aug 13, 2015 22:58:09 GMT -5
RileyEyo mist! Let's start off with the profile /o/ Gene Mods - Can you detail for me how well she can see in the dark/how much her hearing is helped?
- While I understand the basic function of the vomeronasal organ, can you detail for me how Riley can use it?
Background
Can you explain how her mother was sabotaged/possibly who did it ( even if Riley doesn't necessarily know it). While sabotage through job situations or perhaps affecting the person themselves can be done, the Test itself and its results have incredibly rigorous security and can't be tampered with.
Roleplays
So this was in one of Varmun's posts in your Spray Painting Madness rp, but it involves Riley's company. ( and continuing onward I see this topic is addressed in the Looking for Trouble rp as well )
Novigel is a pretty common staple that most companies would have, like company provided first aid kits. But mostly we're somewhat confused as to what this is supposed to imply about Calhoun Corporation, as nothing suspicious was included in its description in Riley's profile.
So if we could get some clarifications added to those things in her profile that would be awesome! Thank you!
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Civilians
C[re]ate Champion
Posts: 38
Preferred Name: Mist
Pronouns: She/Her
Character Profile: Character Hub
Character Name: Riley
Main Account: this one
Status: Busy w/ Life
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Post by Riley on Aug 15, 2015 12:28:44 GMT -5
Done! ^v~)/ I changed/added everything in the skeleton first, is that all right? ovo;; For the eyes, should I perhaps add them under the cat gene mod too? Maybe that easier since it's basically the same? uvu;; I added this in the background: Everything went downhill from there. Due to being sabotaged her mother fell back all the way to Lower Class, leaving both Riley and her father in shock. Unbeknownst to both, her grandfather - in the month prior to her mother's retake - went all out to make sure Riley's mother would go back to where she came from. This went from severe manipulation and downright physiological abuse to applying small doses of poison (enough to make one feel ill, but not enough to cause permanent damage). He managed to do all this without Riley and her father finding out, by using other people - both close and not - to fill the roles. A co-worker giving bad advice? Paid to do so. A friend making a nasty comment? Paid. The doses of poison? Again he used people to obtain it and apply. After all money makes the world go round. Ehm for the rp: I-it wasn't supposed to imply anything ^^;; Only that the Novi-gel had a wrapper around it with the company's logo (like one of those gift thingies companies give when visiting or on events?) Riley just carries it with her for when she gets in trouble - she forgot to take off the wrapper in that rp so that's how Isaac managed to track her later on. I hope that's okay and let me know if more needs to be changed! (ノ*゜▽゜*) |
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Character Name: Rachael
Main Account: Rachael
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Post by Rachael on Aug 17, 2015 22:40:02 GMT -5
RileyThis looks almost ready, thanks! And thanks for clearing up the confusion about the novigel. Only clarification we'd still like is with what accuracy and range Riley can detect chemicals and scents, just to make sure it's a reasonable amount. Once that's done and approved you should be good to go!
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Civilians
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Posts: 38
Preferred Name: Mist
Pronouns: She/Her
Character Profile: Character Hub
Character Name: Riley
Main Account: this one
Status: Busy w/ Life
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Post by Riley on Aug 18, 2015 12:47:05 GMT -5
Done! ^v^)/
I added a range of about 150 feet (about 60 metres, if I didn't convert it right :') which becomes less and less accurate the more confounding factors are present. So in a highly populated area she wouldn't be able to smell so well unless someone is close.
ahhh I hope it's all right d(>v<)b
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hufflefucker with pride
Posts: 4
Preferred Name: Lills
Pronouns: She/her
Character Name: Rachael
Main Account: Rachael
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Post by Rachael on Aug 18, 2015 22:15:44 GMT -5
Rileyalright this all looks good! Welcome to yellow name /o/
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