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Post by CrowlinGallanus on Aug 13, 2015 10:45:13 GMT -5
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Post by Rachael on Aug 13, 2015 23:08:08 GMT -5
CrowlinGallanusHi Glaz! Before we can take a look at this, we'd appreciate it if you matched the details of Crow's hacking/gene mods/unique tech that are in his coded section to the descriptions in his skeleton profile. Thank you!
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Post by CrowlinGallanus on Aug 15, 2015 1:44:47 GMT -5
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Post by Rachael on Aug 22, 2015 19:50:41 GMT -5
CrowlinGallanusYes just like that, thanks! Alrighty here we go, profile first. Gene Mods - For the night vision, can I confirm that although his vision is improved, it isn't perfect?
- Prosthetics - So unfortunately, I'm a little confused about what these are meant to do. Lower heart rates are actually healthier than fast ones, and the increased heart rate/oxygen in his blood would lead to extreme dizziness and would probably make him bleed out faster as well rather than really assist him. So if you could explain that to me and give me some specifics on how much extra endurance you wanted these to give him, that would be awesome.
- So for the bones, 4mm is pretty thin, so I'm not sure how he would get increased endurance from it. I also did some research on tubes vs. solid rods when it comes to carbon fiber, and they would still be liable to twisting and breaking, sometimes more easily than solid rods. Given this, I think you would have to add some thickness to the bones if you wanted to make them more durable, which would also add a bit more weight to him.
- Just remember that even with all these enhancements, they still only allow him to be as powerful as an average athletic human would be. They can't stack on top of each other to make him superhumanly durable and fast without magic.
Unique Tech - Laptop/PDA
- Can you detail for me what the 'the most sophisticated hacking capabilities and task resources at Crowlin's disposal.' are? Also checking that these are not preprogammed hacks and are just programs for him to write hacks, yes?
- Is the secondary memory for his PDA supposed to be an outside harddrive? Can you clarify that, as well as what the hacking capabilities of the PDA are?
- Alright so consulted with sources that actually know about proxies and computers on this one lol. Because Crow's laptop is wireless, in order to have a proxy, it would need to be physically plugged into the proxy network for it work. Also, if his PDA or laptop was plugged into a system as it would have to be for anything above low tech hacking, the proxies would not shield them from backend or reverse hacking at all. Given this, if the frying system you have listed works as instantly as you said to backend hacking attempts, his equipment would get fried almost instantly in any Middle Class or Higher Class area he tried to hack into.
- How much memory are on his devices? In your rps with him you have him downloading entire systems worth of data onto them, but generally facilities will have entire rooms dedicated to upholding their servers and files.
- ID Proxy
- This needs a time limit and a set amount of times an ID can be used before the system cracks it. False IDs take time to make believably and so are valuable and can't be crafted on the fly.
- Surveillance Sniffer
- Going to have to say outright no to this one, unfortunately. While he can set a dampener for a limited amount of time that will block out signals in general, the monitoring signals in the NUIP can't be tracked and so he wouldn't know when they are going out specifically, or what type of signal they're looking for. So it can give them no signal, but he can't replace the signal with false audio or visual.
- EMP Grenade
- We've given a limitation on the range of these in the past, so given that Crow is a Vigilante the largest range his grenade can be is 20 feet, with the signal being much weaker as it gets towards the outside of the circle.
- Given the rarity of EMP grenades, as well as all the other tech that Crow currently has, this should be cut down to only being able to be used once a day.
- Also, please remember that any very important tech would most likely have EMP Shielding on it just like Crow's own tech does.
Backstory - Can you specify how old Crow was when the incident occurred? Also, a raid with that many members would much more likely be by the Common Police, not the Secret. Additionally, unless either of the kids were seen to be holding weapons or something similar, it is far more likely they would be stunned and taken in for reeducation than shot on the spot.
Roleplays - Unfortunately, there are a lot of issues in Crow's rp with Isaac. First off, Crowlin can't hack into an entire police force network, Common or Secret. The only way he could conceivably do this for a facility would be to get into their control room and physically connect into it with his laptop. As we have said with others, none of his hacking or system accessing can be done wirelessly against a closed circuit system. If he did manage to get inside and do that and get into a system, it would be for a limited amount of time as most facilities ( especially in Middle and Upper Class ) would have people on staff to prevent hacking and break ins and fix any attempts.
Next, the jump behind the building. A 12 foot jump over a barbed wire fence without any sort of magic is too high, even with gene mods. Especially so because coiled barbed wire is made specifically so there are no places to grab hold of without hurting yourself somehow. Police facilities especially and most middle/upper class areas would also have bountiful amounts of cameras, so there would be ones he would need to dodge or physically hack in the back of the building.
In the truck bay, Crowlin would not be able to freeze an entire area of cameras from his PDA. As was said before, he would have to physically plug into ( or he could have a limited amount of ranged wireless darts like Isaac does ) each camera he wanted to hack. Additionally, while he can have a program to hotwire a truck, it would take far more than a few seconds to do. Lastly, I'm somewhat concerned what the plan for getting the truck out was? Alarms would sound the moment they left the facility, and seeing as they are a Lower and Middle Class citizen pair driving a stolen police vehicle through the Upper Class district, checkpoints would not be as big an issue for them as the bountiful amount of sensors and security that occupies the area. - Most of the same issues are repeated in his rp with Rakuen. Crowlin can't hack into a network without being connected to it. And again, if a company is being affiliated with the police, their security is going to be especially tight and as soon as the alarm has been triggered people would be checking their network even more so. It also would take much more than a few minutes to fully copy a system. I'd also like to know what his source of information about them being affiliated with the government is, if possible.
Due to the amount of things that need to be checked over, once we come to an agreement on technology and his profile, we'd like to ask you to make another 10 posts before coming back here for eval. Once everything is checked out we'll let you know the post number to come back at!
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Post by CrowlinGallanus on Aug 25, 2015 6:36:55 GMT -5
Gene Mods
- Confirmed: The night vision isn't perfect. It's just a feline reflective layer on the back of the eye that uses the available light to improve sight as much as possible. This is now mentioned in the bio.
- When it comes to the prosthetics, what's mentioned are the capabilities of the artificial heart and lungs when under strenuous conditions. Under normal relaxed circumstances, the heart beats at normal human levels and Crowlin actually breathes slower than most people because his artificial lungs are able to expel CO2 and absorb O2 in greater quantities. Coupled with the rest of his modifications below, I'd say that Crowlin's endurance capability is doubled? So he's able to run a 10k with the effort a normal person runs a 5k. Much of this is now mentioned in the bio.
- As for the carbon fiber bones, I think upping the wall thickness to 5mm is plenty. The idea behind them is that the hollow bones significantly decreases the weight in some of the heaviest bones in the body. This is what allows Crowlin more endurance because there's a noticable drop in weight that his body has to work to carry and move. As for durability, the carbon fiber's tensile strength is greater than human bone, and coupled with its ability to flex a fair amount before breaking increases the stress that they can take even if hollow like Crowlin's.
- As for what physical enhancements are capable of, I'm actually a little confused. Obviously putting these kinds of modifications on a normal person could give them an increase in athletic capability, but what about people who are already athletic? Crowlin works out quite often to keep himself fit, so he already has the capabilities of an athletic person. Do these weight reduction, muscle strengthening, and endurance increasing modifications do nothing for him then? If this is the case, then it should be remarked on the site that these kinds of modifications are purely medical and instead offer no athletic increase to anyone if there's a cap to what they can provide.
Unique Tech- Laptop- Well these are indeed hacking programs that Crowlin wrote that are essentially preprogrammed? That's part of the idea behind hacking. You don't really write hacks on the fly persay, you usually use the tools at your ready disposal to run their tasks to find and exploit weaknesses in a network while tweaking and adapting them with the information gained along the way into a network/computer. The only way that Redux hackers would have to repeatedly write new hacks on a consistent basis is if nearly none of Novus's computer systems were universalized, which is immensely impractical and unlikely for the city, and the hackers had to write an entirely new program customized for each computer system they intended to attack. As for what programs/tools Crowlin has to use, they're listed below and after employing those, it's a matter of navigating the system and using the available exploits to steal the desired information or remotely control the computer.
- A network mapper for host discovery, IP and port scanning, and ID'ing what what kind of outer security methods (like firewalls) are being used.
- Paket-sniffer for trying to obtain security passwords from network communication.
- Network password cracker program via brute-force, dictionary, or cyptanalysis methods.
- A packet crafter to scan for vulnerabilities in a firewall.
- Rootkit to covertly control and install viruses, spyware, and malware on a computer system. Allows him to break into more restricted sections of an accessed computer system.
- Virtual computer system which simulates his computer digitally within his laptop, acting as a dummy system to assist in identifying and fending off attempts to trace and backhack him.
[li]The laptop itself is actually only local and not capable or wireless networking without connecting it to his PDA (which is wireless capable) or to the long-range wireless network antennae Crowlin has, which was not listed because it's not really unique tech. This antennae would allow Crowlin to observe and access wireless networks within approximately a 1-block distance.[/li] [li]Given the setting's tech level, I'd say the laptop's storage is 4TB.[/li] [li]As for the Proxy bit, not sure who you talked to, but you don't at all have to be physically connected to a system in order to use a proxy. A proxy is just a second virtual location that you're routing your activity through; basically acting as a middle-man who recieves the instructions of what website or computer data you want to access, gets it for you, and then sends it to you instead so that it's not actually you being seen to be accessing the site or data. This can be done through physical cables or through a wireless network because all you're doing is routing your activity through a seperate location. It's actually a method specifically employed to delay or prevent tracing to the original source. Either way, in the case of Crowlin's laptop it's actually I'll specify it as more of an IP and MAC mask that can be changed/randomized as needed to help prevent his laptop from being uniquely identified during different 'missions'. I can edit that in his profile.[/li] [li]As for the electrical surge that fries the laptop or PDA, it's actually mentioned in the description that this only happens if there's attempted access using a wrong pin or password, someone tries to pry open the devices and pull out the harddrives, or they're subjected to attempted hacking while Crowlin is not using them.[/li] [li]PDA- Yes, the secondary memory acts as extra storage within the PDA with faster writing and erasing capabilities. Essentially Crowlin can upload specific hacking tools from his laptop (only 1 or 2 due to smaller storage) to use on the fly if needed. Past those, the PDA only has basic password cracking and network mapping, but it can act as a trigger for programs and commands that Crowlin has placed on a system beforehand, such as freezing a camera feed of an already hacked network, or telling a a previously hacked system to start a network shutdown/blackout. As for storage, and given the tech level of the setting, I'd say the PDA has 200GB main with the secondary being 64GB.[/li] [li]ID Proxy- As far as this is concerned, the timer on it I can defintiely understand and I would probably say 30 minutes every day or two seems fair given the situations it would be used in. As for the number of times it can be used before it's cracked, I would probably recommend that number being pretty high. Considering many people who use one do so because they need to keep their identity secret for their daytime lives, characters in a situation where they lose their false ID would be forced out of the game in a lot of illegal activities until they got a new one. Which means that their ability to fullfill the role the RPer designed them for ends until they can get a new false ID. Maybe instead of a set number of times that it can be used, implementing an overall time limit which the ID would be usable. Such as if it was a NUIP port plugin, it only lasts 3-4 months before the circuitry begins to degrade and fails.[/li] [li]Surveillance Sniffer- What do you think of the idea of dropping the information feeding aspect of it and make it purely a signal analyzer. Basically it recognizes that there is an incoming signal making a request for audio. Crowlin can't do anything about it until it ends, but he can at least know to stop a conversation until it does. Being able to recognize an incoming signal and what it's requesting is simple enough for someone with a good understanding of computer systems.[/li] [li]EMP Grenade- All of those are fine.[/li][/ul] Backstory
- The BG in the coded profile is a bit more detailed and mentions that Crowlin was 14 at the time of the incident. I can add this to the base version as well.
- I can definitely imply that the raid had fewer officers there, but any raid launched by the secret police is going to need a fair number of people in it simply on the principle of safety for the officers as they clear the area. Too few and the suspect(s) can escape, or worse they hide in an area that's overlooked because there aren't enough SPs to clear each room as they go, and officers start getting shot in the back.
- I can edit it some and mention that one of the kids had a weapon on him that he turned to fight the officers with and they were subsequently shot. I left that specific part a little more vague because Crowlin couldn't actually see what was happening.
Roleplays- Alrighty, there are two points regarding the hacking that Crowlin does for both RPs. The first part is that neither of the locations are directly associated with the police or Secret police. In the RP with Isaac, it's a 3rd party food distrobution center that makes deliveries to the SP HQ. This difference was edited slightly along the way, though perhaps not actually written, as some aspects of Novus as a setting became better understood. In the RP with Rakuen, it's an independent tech firm that's working on some new tech that's being sponsored by the police. Neither of them operate on police networks, so the level of security on either of them is likely not as high as you're thinking. In addition to this, I have a lot of concern over the idea that these computer systems are purely closed-circuit anyway, as this is incredibly implausible today that a company does not have a wireless network at their location for multiple reasons such as the use of corporate laptops or tablets.
- The second point is that I have concerns understanding what a hacker is in the Redux world. The basic idea of a hacker is that their activities of controlling a system or stealing data are done from outside the target system and with as much preparation and distance (physical and virtual) as possible. From what I'm gathering, this idea that "hacking" is only accomplished from within a building and at a system terminal lends itself to a person simply being a data thief. While doing that does essentially bypass the need for hacking tools since you're already accessing from a point within the network, it's much more dangerous for the person and anyone with a thumbdrive with a password cracker can do that, so that's not really hacking at all. If that's the case then there's really no such thing as a hacker in Redux.
- As for the 12 foot fence jump, that harkens back a bit to what Crowlin is capable of since he's already athletic and then having the physical modifications in addition to that. The fence can be shortened if need be, but as for the razor wire obstacle, if one can jump in the way described in the RP it actually is possible to avoid the razor wire if one is careful enough. [visual] As for cameras, like I said the security level you're implying is questionable since the company isn't actually associated with the Police. And actually, copious amounts of cameras can actually be more detrimental, as that's more that a security guard would have to look at and the more likely that (s)he wouldn't notice Crowlin on a given the camera anyway.
- Crowlin actually only froze one camera with his PDA, which was the one pointed towards the truck they intended to steal. This was intended to be done using the access to the building's network that he'd set up with his laptop ahead of time and then transferred certain commands (like shutting down certain cameras) which he could send using the network backdoor that he left open. As mentioned with the matter ragarding what a hacker is, none of this is done on a whim or off the cuff but rather planned out and prepared ahead of time by Crowlin. Same thing with hotwiring the truck, though his method there was more to reduce damage to the truck when it could have been done by changing and cutting more wires to bypass the truck's security altogether. In any case, these are specific and targeted actions and tools that Crow had already intended to employ, rather than him just having the capability to do any of this just whenever he needed to. If I need to emphasize that more in future RPs, then that's no problem.
- As for getting the truck out, Crowlin was going to send another prepared command through his PDA to temporarily shut the building's system down. This would disable the alarms/cameras/etc during that time while they drove the truck away. The intention was for them to drive the truck into an alley that would keep it hidden while they took the food where they wanted over the time they cared to bother with it. However it's feeling as though it's actually impossible to move unseen in the upper district rather than difficult. If necessary, the RP's setting can be moved to the other side of the Upper/Middle district border.
- With the RP with Rakuen, he didn't dump the entire system's data onto his laptop, only the files of the research projects that the company is working on.
- "...until Crow finally found the reserch and development files. He could already hear the sirens from the approaching police, so he didn't have time to try and find the exact one he was looking for. Instead he dumped the entire subsection into his laptop's harddrive."
[li]As for the info source for the tech firm as a target, that's more an issue of suspension of disbelief. Maybe a researcher there was talking in a bar about what he was working on and that made its way into the information rings. It seems a bit unnecessary as a subject to focus on anyway, given that the hacking or information that he got from it is basically context and don't really matter since it's an RP centered on Crowlin and Rakuen meeting for the first time. He could gain nothing from the information he took and it wouldn't affect the RP in the slightest.[/li][/ul] I think that covers everything! LOL
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Post by Rachael on Sept 8, 2015 3:59:05 GMT -5
CrowlinGallanusHi Glaz! Sorry for the extreme wait on this, school has been kicking me pretty hard already;; Gene Mods- If you could include the fact that his vision still isn't perfect in near complete darkness in the profile, that would be great. Thank you!
- Because of how this can stack with other modifications and tech he has, would you be okay with saying his capability is only 50% more than an average athletic person? So if an average athletic could run 5km with moderate difficult, he could expend the same amount of effort for 7.5km. Of course, this distance and the amount of energy needed for it can be changed with magic.
- I think I may have misunderstood slightly on this one, sorry. I interpreted it as you were saying they have significantly increased endurance/weight/etc as compared to solid carbon fiber bones, not just regular bones. If you are just comparing them to regular bones then that's fine, as carbon fibre bones are meant to provide those benefits. Sorry for the confusion.
- Crowlin's previous athletic ability does not mean that his gene mods get to make him more powerful than anyone else with gene mods, sorry. We have stated multiple times when asked about gene mods that they will only allow somebody to skip to an average athletic human's ability, and that anything further would require magic. However, that does not mean that they are purely cosmetic for individuals who do exercise before or after receiving modifications. The modifications allow Crow, or anyone else for that matter, to take breaks from their workouts or much of the time eat however they please without having to worry about unhealthy weight gain or losing their muscle mass. Exercise and training is also still useful because even if you have strength, it doesn't mean much if you don't know how to use it. So no, you don't get to be more raw power because you also exercise on top of gene mods, but they are not also purely cosmetic for individuals who train on top of receiving them.
Unique TechLaptop/PDA - Forgive me if I am being blunt here, but I am going to attempt to save us a lot of trouble here by skipping over the nitty gritty of this laptop and PDA and being frank with you. Crowlin's laptop, and his current hacking systems and abilities by extension, are massively overpowered. And in the end that is what matters to us far more than the specifics. You are giving Crowlin access to entire systems ( many of them police monitored or operated ) at the click of a button with no opposition and having him expend little to no effort on the actual hacking process. So what I'm going to do is explain the basis of how hacking works on redux ( and mind you this will be a simple version, because as I said, we care about fairness ooc, not tech specifics ) so that you can try and rework the laptop and PDA in a way that does not overpower Crowlin.
- The majority of hacking in redux must have some kind of physical connection because, given how almost all of the city is run on some sort of electrical network, it would be massively overpowered to let anyone hack into other systems from anywhere. Especially so because the setting is supposed to provide many difficulties for those working against the 'system' of the Executives. Because so much of the city is run via networks, a large amount of Secret and Common police forces, as well as private firms are actually dedicated to keeping an eye on updating code and security measures all over the city and watching out for potential break ins. So while perhaps it is physically possible to attempt a hack in from a wireless network, any official setting would have people hired specifically to watch out for these sort of things. So in Lower Class and Slums, hacking simple systems wirelessly might be a possibility. But above that, most companies ( and especially any with even a slight connection to the Secret Police ) would have people hired to be on watch for break ins in the system.
- For simpler technology like a security camera that's a common brand or perhaps a certain type of lock, precoded programs can be used. However, when it comes to taking over an entire system, you can't just click a button and have access to all of its components in a short time period. People would be working against you the entire time after the first few password attempts were incorrect, and even if one password is guessed in any middle or upper class setting it is unlikely that there wouldn't be additional security checks. However, we do give more leeway in this and say that if you physically can get into the control room of any sort of building, you would have considerably more ease accessing the different programs there and the main system without outside monitoring forces detecting you.
- Essentially, the problem with Crowlin's current hacking technique is that you have allowed him access to entire systems and parts of the city in highly guarded areas without him having to break a sweat or spend more than a few minutes gaining access to said systems. While hacking into systems is entirely possible, in anyplace above Lower Class it is by no means easy and requires both intelligence and the physical capabilities to get close enough to physically connect. With your current technology and the way you have been writing Crowlin, he has little to no restrictions on how he can manipulate the system and so he does so with an unfair amount of ease. His technology and hacking skills need to be broken down in a way that he can still hack, but not in any sort of way that allows him to face no difficulty whatsoever in doing so. If you need help doing so, feel free to ask here and I can of course help with examples, but I felt that it might be beneficial to break down the basic problem here instead of going through the nitty gritty specifics.
[/ul]ID Proxy - ID Proxies as a tech piece are something that have already been approved for various other members of the site. Our general guidelines for them are that they can last two to three hours max and that each false ID can only be used one to two times before the system cracks it and a new one must be made or purchased. Sneaking around the system in character is supposed to be a very difficult process that doesn't allow for extended periods of time to do illegal work. However, there is nothing restraining roleplayers out of character from coming up with various ways their character could have gotten another fake id to work with. If you need help thinking of resources for Crowlin, I can help you brainstorm some.
Surveillance Sniffer - As was said before, Crowlin can't track the signals going to his NUIP from the Secret Police. I'm sorry, but this is not up for negotiation. There are constantly signals going in and out of the NUIP, and the audio searches are built to be indiscernible from any of the regular feeds and signals being processed. As was said before, he can have set periods of time where all signals are blocked out or dampened, but he can't tell when the Secret Police is sending out signals to try and watch him.
EMP Grenades - Alright, then please make these edits to his profile! For reference, the 20 feet is the diameter, not the radius.
Backstory- Alright then! If you could match the coded section with the skeleton that would be awesome. I said just genes/tech/and hacking before but I really should have asked you to match all of the coded section to the skeleton, my bad.
- Ah, I think there may be some confusion here about how the Secret Police function. They rarely work in teams with other Secret Police members ( the only exception being the occasional pair of two for harder cases ), and while it is possible a Secret Police member could accompany the Common Police on a raid, nobody except that person themselves would actually know they were Secret Police except other Secret Police members. The Secret Police are made for individual infiltration work and surveillance when in the field. The entire point of their existence is that they're there, but you never know who they are. They may occasionally be called in to respond to emergencies ( such as Vigilante bombings which require immediate attention ), but even then they would do so under the guise of being a Common Police member. So while a raid of that size could be feasible for Common Police ( with possible an unknown Secret Police member in their midst ), there would never be a raid of entirely Secret Police members. And even if there were, as an outsider there would be no way to tell they weren't just Common Police.
- That would be great, thank you! You don't have to make it so that Crowlin saw the weapon, but if you could add it in as something we would know ooc that would be appreciated.
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- Any company affiliated with the police would have access to their resources and firms for preventing digital break ins. Especially so if they were developing weaponry, as that has the possibility to be highly dangerous and is generally not something they would want in the public's hands. And I will clarify somewhat, sorry. While the system may have wireless access, it is not anything that Crowlin could hack into, for the reasons said above in regards to his laptop.
- See above comments on hacking in the laptop section.
- Somewhat confused by the visual you have there because if you'd added in his hand on the fence it seems like it would be on the wire? But regardless, after talking this over, we've made a standard saying that without magic, it is only possible to lift yourself five feet off the ground with magic. So assuming Crow is around 6 feet, he would only be able to reach the very tips of his fingers to 11 feet high, which is not enough for him to grab the fence or flip himself over it as you have illustrated. Given magic, he could jump higher and have enough force to fling himself over if he could successfully find a spot without razor. As for the issue with the cameras, I read it as that he didn't find a blind spot, but that there were literally no cameras on the back of the building. The former is fine if he searched for the blindspot, but given the center's location in Middle Class and even slight connection with the Secret Police, having no cameras at all on an entire side of the building would be unreasonable.
- This ties back into the problem before with Crowlin not being able to control everything in a building with so much ease. The truck hacking was not so much a problem of function as it was time. A few seconds is far too fast for a code to run, and would also require it be perfect and that Crowlin knew every detail about the specific truck beforehand.
- Once more, this was an issue of Crowlin not being able to control everything in the building at the touch of a button without having gotten access to its control room. More importantly here, I would like to stress that it is entirely possible to sneak around the Upper and Middle Class, yes. However, there is a huge difference between an individual person avoiding cameras and sensors and two criminals driving a stolen truck ( that is associated with the government ) through the streets of one of the most highly guarded areas in the city. It is theoretically possible yes, but it's not going to be so easy as clicking a button and shutting off everything in your way. It would require explicit planning of the route before hand and rigging of each individual sensor ( for example, with something like Isaac's wireless darts, which could be activated as they passed nearby ). So yes, this is a possible operation, but it is in essence an incredibly more difficult process than two individuals sneaking around by themselves, and should be written as such.
- My apologies on the misreading of the Rakuen rp with the memory bit. However, it is important to note that for the reason mentioned in the rest of this eval he would still not be able to access the entire company's files and system from outside the building.
- Glaz, I am going to be frank again here and tell you that when I ask a question for an eval, I need you to trust me that it is for a reason. By itself, this is not a detail I would normally focus on, but in the context of all of your rps I ask it in order to ensure that Crow has a reasonable source of information that is not connected to the previously mentioned overpowered hacking. That explanation works and I thank you for it, but I ask that in the future you please keep in mind that I don't ask you questions just for the sake of asking them and that you respect that there is a reason for each question.
And that is it for now! Sorry again for the long wait, and of course feel free to post any questions or clarifications you have here! If you would like to work on this one section at a time instead of in big chunks at once, that is something we can do.
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Post by Rachael on Mar 13, 2016 18:05:37 GMT -5
CrowlinGallanusHey glaz did you want to start looking at this again? We can just go over the gene mods section first and work from there to make this easier /o/
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Post by CrowlinGallanus on Mar 14, 2016 18:40:16 GMT -5
RachaelHey there Lills! Yeah, let's go ahead and get this thing taken care of! So, gene mods. Edited the profile to mention that his night vision, and natural night vision in general of course, is limited by the amount of available light and so is hindered when in near perfect darkness. The athleticism bit being cut to a 50% increase I'm fine with, and actually I'm thinking of simplifying the mods a bit, scrapping the artificial lungs and heart, instead subbing in human genetic mods that increases the density and resilience of his cardiac muscle tissue to strengthen his heart's function, and the density of the capillaries in his natural lungs to help pull more oxygen into his blood. It makes more sense for his character than having artificial parts in him. As far as the carbon fiber bones thing, I'm makin a slight edit. They're still essentially the same as before, hollow with 5mm wall thickness, but they also have a loose internal carbon fiber lattice (like birds but organized/evenly spaced). Due to their flexibility, they have essentially the same capabilities as solid c.f. bones with the exception that they're lighter in weight. And I think that covers everything on the gene mods front, barring any more questions or specification you might want. 
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