Vigilantes
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Preferred Name: Nilo
Pronouns: she/her
Main Account: Rakuen
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Post by Rakuen on Aug 27, 2015 1:01:35 GMT -5
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Post by Kendra on Sept 3, 2015 15:01:34 GMT -5
RakuenHello there Nilo /o/ ! Everything looks good from this end on gene mods! I just have one small question. - What did you mean by double jump for the rabbit feet? I'm imagining something similar to a rabbit binky with switching directions in mid air or something similar. Could you tell me what you meant on this?
- And just need one small thing for her background. Could you tell me how she found the Vigilantes? It could be anything from catching someone off guard while they were helping people, getting caught up in another raid, or confronting people from an overheard conversation.
And for RPs! Just a few things here. - Early on in your RP with Crowlin, you had Rakuen kicking someone into into the air and then jumping up onto a rooftop while also taking them with her. This is a bit too much without the use of magic, but with it it's totally fine. Really cool feats that are superhuman ( mega jumps and kicks and stuff like that ) can be achieved with the use of Physical Magic. Jumping onto a roof without magic would also need to involve scaling the wall in some way as well!
Other than that, you're good to go ! Everything else looks good ;v; <3 |
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Vigilantes
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Posts: 23
Preferred Name: Nilo
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Main Account: Rakuen
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Post by Rakuen on Sept 4, 2015 16:21:24 GMT -5
Hi again Kenny ; v; <33
> so for the rabbit feet, i meant double jumping as 'jumping quicker, changing direction within mid-jump' yes like a binky lol. (maybe i should call it binky to be more precise lol)
> hmmn, I guess more or less after her father's death, she went back to the burned up neighborhood and found a few stragglers looking around, overheard about the vigilantes and joined them, wanting to save people from such terrible raids.
as for rps;
> It was a 'low roof,' let's say about 10-15 ft. at best. Well, the idea was she first, she hopped up to meet her feet to his torso and kicked him up to get him at least airborne 5ft off the ground. Then, she jumped, took him by the jacket as her other hand took the edge of the roof and with all her might and adrenaline hurled him over the roof barely. Her fingers bled from it and Crow's body tumbled to even get more on the roof. I could add a trashcan heap to make it easier for her to gain height, if that's better.
But, if you wanted me to add that she used magic whilst saving him, then okay.
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Post by Kendra on Sept 7, 2015 22:18:32 GMT -5
Rakuen- The rabbit feet are good then /o/ Just wanted to double check since I wasn't sure if you meant like that or the video game type aha.
- That sounds good for how she found them as well. Thank you for clarifying on that.
- Thank you for explaining what you meant, Nilo! Unfortunately, it's still a bit too much for a human to do without the aid of physical magic. The jump height of 5ft ( similar to what we had for bikini ! ) would still be for Rak as well. So for example, if she climbed up trash piles / dumpsters and dragged Crow with her, then threw him onto the roof once they were close it'd be cool! But what I'm getting is that she kicked Crow into the air, and then jumped about 10ft with him. Lots of weight and resistance, reaction time, and the kicking him that high wouldn't really be humanly possible without outside aid ;v; With magic however, she'd be able to do all of those things !
You don't have to go back and change the rp, it's just a note for future rps once you're approved!
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Post by Kendra on Mar 13, 2016 18:08:05 GMT -5
RakuenHey there nilo! ;v; Just wanted to do a quick nudge on this and see how everything is going! I just needed a word that you got what I meant and I can get you that colored name. So sorry for the wait on this ! |
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Vigilantes
C[re]ate Champion
is in need of more pikachus
Posts: 23
Preferred Name: Nilo
Pronouns: she/her
Main Account: Rakuen
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Post by Rakuen on Mar 14, 2016 2:24:00 GMT -5
ahh, i've been so busy that i've totally forgotten about this lmao i was so used to rakuen being a white name lololol yes, I understand what you mean and thank you for elaborating it for me  thank you so much for revisiting my eval~! <33 |
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Post by Kendra on Mar 16, 2016 17:30:14 GMT -5
and you're good to go !! Thank you Nilo Approved ;v; |
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