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Post by Enchilada on Aug 17, 2015 17:32:21 GMT -5
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Post by Kendra on Aug 27, 2015 0:17:13 GMT -5
Hey there Viz! Sorry for the wait on this.
( haha tough tattoo what a nerd )
So your gene mods check out! Just one question on those.
For the carbon fiber bones on his spine, is it the full spine or just the top/bottom half?
And for tech!
A couple questions on the taser gun! For phase one, you mentioned something lasting 5 seconds. Did you mean charge time on the 5ft long shot? And how far in distance are the other short bursts?
For phase two, what exactly do you mean by stun? And how long would this last. Also, I’d like to see 5 or 6 bullets instead of 10 if that’s okay with you!
And if you could tell me a recharge time on the glove and gun that'd be awesome.
How high can the boots help him jump? I just need a bit of clarification on that and they’ll be good to go.
For background, you mention that Kris is the leader of one of the smallest branches of Vigilantes, but in the other facts portion where more details are given on the branch - it makes them seem much larger than the backstory would imply. If you could clear up the confusion on the size for me, I’d appreciate it!
Also, I found out through a RP, but could you list in the background section somewhere that his family is Middle Class?
As for the question, you’re entirely able to change anything you like after eval.
All you need to do is post a request in the IC Changes Section, and we’ll look it over and approve it for you o7
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Post by Enchilada on Aug 27, 2015 18:28:43 GMT -5
KendraCarbon fiber bones: just bottom half, edited in tech: taser gun - i mean the actual like....bolt laser thing, but I'm actually changing that to 3 seconds on the 5 ft long shot. The distance for the short bursts are the same - they can extend to 5 ft max phase 2: like um...restricted movement, i guess? like...compared to the regular taser shot which would sting a lot and maybe kinda stun smaller ppl in a electrocution sort of way, phase two is essentially a much stronger version in which the bullet kind of emits outward at contact and basically freezes their movement (depending on resistances obviously)...hope that helped ;;;;; recharge for gun: 3 hrs if at empty recharge for gloves: (~6 stored uses on each hand, 30 minutes to recharge to full power, ~5 minutes to charge per use) boots: helps him jump about 140% current jumping ability background: added in kris's family middle class branch issues: How's this? by contacts i mean ppl "allies" that aren't technically in their branch - and everything they do is on a smaller scale. also took out the 'a lot' part of the black market bit
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Post by Kendra on Aug 30, 2015 2:44:15 GMT -5
EnchiladaThank you viz !! All of that looks awesome, and I very much appreciate the clarifications. So you're good to go and approved /o/
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