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eco ye
Aug 20, 2015 0:57:56 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Aug 20, 2015 0:57:56 GMT -5
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eco ye
Aug 27, 2015 1:57:33 GMT -5
Post by Rachael on Aug 27, 2015 1:57:33 GMT -5
@chibicrashey Hey Chibi! Sorry for the wait on this. Gene Mods - Can I know about how enhanced his hearing/vision is?
- For the bones, having all of his limbs is actually over 50%! He can have like from the knees down and elbows down or legs and spine, but not all of his limbs, sorry!
Background/Occupation
So for this, I'd like some details on how he sabotaged himself, and some information on how long he's been unemployed. Citizens of Novus are pretty much guaranteed a job fitting to their class, with only Slums members consistently having to worry about unemployment. So the city would be more than willing to provide any Middle Class member with a job suited to their rank, though it might not be necessarily what they want to do. After they've been given a job they are still free to look for something more suited to their tastes ( provided it fits their rank ), but unemployment is rarely a worry for Middle Class Members. If he did insist on not taking an offered job from the government, it's highly likely he would be dropped down in class to Lower Class or even the Slums.
So tying into that, your posts and writing are fine and I'm not going to make you edit or do anymore, but it should be clear that in the future the context of them would most likely be changed a bit as he would have some kind of job ready for him if you keep him in Middle Class.
Also just clarifying, what sort of Vigilante work does he do? I'm assuming he works with his mother's old contacts, but some very basic info about what he does as a Vigilante would be great to know.
Thank you!
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eco ye
Aug 28, 2015 1:30:24 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2015 1:30:24 GMT -5
aaah, that's okay; thanks for your time o/;; okay, so, ah... Gene Mods - ooh...how to explain, well, um... I'd say they're roughly as good as a dog/wolf's? Like, um...I mostly just imaged him being able to like... For hearing; that he'd somewhat be able to hear whispering from across a rather large room? Nothing that big in mind really; and it does come with the disadvantage that his hearing is too well and loud noises could actually hurt him? And vision, well uh... He'd be able to see relatively well in the dark? Not perfectly, but enough that he could discern things to a certain degree and also well...not bump into everything?;;
- Aaaah, well in that case I changed it legs and spine then?
As for unemployment I've kinda been RPing him as like...he's maybe only fairly recently dropped himself down to Middle class? H-honestly it's mostly me having a hard time thinking of an appropriate job for him, but i can definitely throw him into something within his next rp to uh...yeah;;; Um...for now I put him down as teacher; I'll definitely keep that in mind/know that for future characters though o/;; And the sabotaging thing, hmm... That might have been too strong a word I used;;; I'd, um...honestly mostly been thinking that he purposely did bad on The Test so that he'd be dropped down a class; nothing...too big honestly? Unless that's no good at something else needs to happen;; If that is okay, I made the change in his background; As for what he does, uh... Would things like espionage/information gathering be okay? I'll add that into his profile if that's okay o/;; |
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Aug 28, 2015 1:56:28 GMT -5
Post by Rachael on Aug 28, 2015 1:56:28 GMT -5
@chibicrashey
That looks good for gene mods, thank you!
And putting him as a teacher for now also works fine. The failing the test method is also totally good, just wanted to double check how he'd lowered himself in class. Thanks for adding that.
Espionage and info gathering also checks out as well, so just add that to the profile for me to give a quick look over and then you should be good to go!
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eco ye
Aug 28, 2015 2:07:15 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Aug 28, 2015 2:07:15 GMT -5
Okay, um, I added an extra paragraph to his background about the vigilante work stuff. I hope it's okay!;;
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Aug 28, 2015 2:11:02 GMT -5
Post by Rachael on Aug 28, 2015 2:11:02 GMT -5
@chibicrashey
Alright you're all good! Congrats on the blue name \o/
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